Essay, upcoming SlideShare, loading. In addition to this people have more leisure time in which to enjoy a wider range of recreational activities. Well-known"tions relevant to the topic you are writing about will make your composition more interesting. Conclusion, final Paragraph balanced consideration/ your opinion directly or indirectly. What is more, the average child spends as many as eight hours a day in school. However, whether it has led to increased personal happiness is highly debatable; many people would argue that greater freedom has led to increased social disorder and personal dissatisfaction. Whats more, you will get unforgettable impressions and a lot of exercise.
As Marion Harper Jr said, "Advertising is found in societies which have passed the point of satisfying the basic animal needs." 11 Read the four topic sentences below and match each with the corre-sponding paragraph. They say computer games are violent.
Do the topic sentences clearly summarise the content of each paragraph? However, is this new a positive or a negative thing? Racing animals have a very short working life and are well-treated throughout. Note: Although these are "balanced" arguments, if you feel that either the for or against side is stronger and should be supported, this side should be presented in paragraphs 4 5, thus leading the reader to your conclusion. They find short-term happiness in material goods and entertainment, but boredom and frustration soon send them looking for fresh distractions. Being exposed again and again to products which one cannot afford produces frustration and dissatisfaction. A Animals are forced to perform unnatural acts for the pleasure of the public.
Introduction, paragraph 1 state topic (summary of the topic without giving your opinion). A good essay of this type should consist of: a) an introductory paragraph in which you clearly state the topic to be discussed, without giving your opinion; b) a main body in which the points for and against along with your justifications, examples or reasons. A country's economy may become so dependent on tourism that it is weakened. Arguments for using animals for entertainment. Think of the opposing arguments when planning your essay. Furthermore, children usually spend five years of their lives at home before they even go to school. Does each topic sentence adequately summarise the argument it presents? In countries with a large number of immigrants there are often social problems, and immigrants stand out as being "different" and even inferior.